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especially the teachers and the students 第一个单词后加among Some college teachers think that students shouldn't have a boyfriend or a girlfriend in school because it will effect their study 中a boyfriend or a girlfriend 改为复数 还有effect改为affect So it goes without saying that students shouldn't have a boyfriend or a girlfriend in school.这句话与上一句之间逻辑性不强，连接太突兀，之前应多做解释 However,the college students hold the idea that it isn't a good thing that the teachers are against the love between the students 这句话太繁琐 have a love talk with his love 表达欠佳 it is different his friends and parents 这句错误 So there is no-doubt that the teachers are against the students in love. 其中no-doubt 用在这7a64e78988e69d83364里意思不对 ……
我给你按原意重写一下吧
Though the world has been developing rapidly nowadays, there are still many people who are in great need of help. Helping is not an action which is fullfilled with payment, instead, grabing the chances to give others a hand, we actually gain profit for ourselves at the same time. Of course someone will come up with the question : should the we somehow promote the reward for doing wonderful things. Honestly speaking， this is indeed a quetion.
To solve the question, we should firstly figure out what are we really helping for. Is it just simply about giving for rewarding ? if so, i have to say that you miss the true meaning of helping. But on the other hand , just as the old saying goes: good turn deserves another. rewarding is the kind of activity that is aiming at encouraging, encourages help good things last long
To sum up , in my opinion, we should definitely reward the individuals who have helped others, and at the same time helpers surely should not only help when it is rewarded
看完以后好像明白了题目的意思。。可以看出来你很尽力的往文章里加一些比较上档次的连接词，希望这样能让你的语言看起来高端一些，不过这掩饰不了语句里大量的语法错误，用词错误。
最重要的一点是，e68a84e79fa5e98193331不知道是我没看明白还是你自己想的有问题，你的文章逻辑太混乱，论述的论点论据不明确，前因后果模糊。。。
我只是按照你的愿意重新修正了一下语句，文章根本性的结构逻辑问题还需要你自己努力修改
一、用于作文开头的万e5a48de588b67a686964616f362能模板：
1、Many people insist that... 很多人(坚持)认为……
2、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that... 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……
3、A lot of people seem to think that... 很多人似乎认为……
二、引出不同观点的万能模板：
1、People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that.... 人们对……的观点因人而异。有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为……
2、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
3、People may have different opinions on... 人们对……可能会有不同的见解。
4、There are different opinions among people as to... 关于……人们的观点大不相同。
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
三、得出最终结论的万能模板：
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that... 把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论……
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that... 考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论……
3、Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that... 因此，自然我们得出以下结论。。。
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。
5、All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之，我们没有……是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
这句话一般用于作文结尾，属万能句式，句式较为简单，方便操作。
四， 提出最终建议的万能模板
1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
2、It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ... 该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。
3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ... 毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视。
4、Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that... 显然，如果我们想做某事，我们需要……
5、Only in this way can we... 只有这样,我们才能...
6、It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到...
1...and the others